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Use Character Arc To Improve Your Story

Not all characters change for the better...Al Pacino in Scarface

Not all characters change for the better…
Al Pacino in Scarface

“A character arc is the status of the character as it unfolds throughout the story, the storyline, or series of episodes.”

~ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Character_arc

“In real life we each regard ourselves as the main character.”

~ On Writing, Stephen King

As part of our workshop series, I wanted to take a look at the concept of Character Arc, and how it can enable us to write characters that:

                                    * Make the story better

                                    * Are plausible

The Character Arc, explored in Chris Vogler’s book The Writer’s Journey, is a framework. Are there flaws? Yes, I believe so. Characters don’t always need to change to grow. Some grow in their resolve. They remain steadfast in their beliefs.

When I first committed to writing, the only book on craft I’d read was Stephen King’s On Writing. It’s an excellent book, and I referenced it a few times for today’s post. So, I dove into writing my first book. I had great fun, and only a vague vision of where my story would go. But I got stuck. When a girl from mudding and four-wheeler country says she’s stuck, she means mired in muck up to her elbows.

The second book on craft I read was Chris Vogler’s The Writer’s Journey. Here’s what using the framework did for me:

It enabled me to learn to ask the right questions of my characters, and move the story forward. I began to understand how to connect-the-dots. Using the Hero’s Journey, as Vogler suggests, as a guide to creating a realistic Character Arc, helped me create a cohesive beginning (Act 1), middle (Act 2), and end (Act 3). 

I still write the first, even second draft from an organic mindset. One of my great pleasures in writing is the feeling of awe and adventure as I listen to the whisper of my subconscious. I live a safe life with my remarkable husband and children; writing is my great road trip.

It’s awesome to hit the road and words in the spirit of spontaneity and telling the story as honestly as we can, but if we get lost, there’s nothing wrong with referencing a map.

 I encourage you to further research character arcs, the three- act story, archetypes,  as well as  steadfast characters. I’m using my notes taken from The Writer’s Journey. I’ve broken down the Arc into three acts. The words in parentheses reference the Hero’s Journey.

Act One:

1. Limited awareness of problem (Ordinary World)

2. Increased awareness (Call to Adventure)

3. Reluctance to change (Refusal)

4. Overcoming reluctance (Meeting with the Mentor) 

Act Two:

5. Overcoming reluctance (Crossing the Threshold)

6. Experimenting with first change (Tests, Allies, and Enemies)

7. Preparing for big change (Approach to Inmost Cave)

8. Attempting big change (Ordeal)

9. Consequences of the attempt (Reward)

Act Three:

10. Rededication to change (The Road Back)

11. Final attempt at big change (Resurrection)

12. Final mastery of problem (Return with Elixer)

Here are some examples of questions using this framework can help us ask:

* How does the character become aware of conflict/ problems?

* How will the character initially react to the conflict?

* Can the character turn to anyone for advice and honesty?

* What motivates the character to a.) change or b.) remain true to their belief system?

I would love to hear your thoughts on character arc, the Hero’s Journey, or the three-act story structure. How have they affected your writing and storyline, or have you found another system that works for your manuscript?

Thank you for participating.

 
 

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Writing the Dark Stories

“I believe these stories exist because sometimes we need to create unreal monsters and bogies to stand in for all the things we feel in our real lives….That truth is monsters are real, and ghosts are real, too. They live inside us, and sometimes they win.”

~ Stephen King, from the 2001 Introduction to The Shining

“Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality.” 

~Edgar Allan Poe 

I love this time of year not only for Halloween, but the gloom and wind chafed by all the brilliant autumn colors. Dark juxtaposes light for a brief time, then days shorten and we celebrate with costumes and candy. I’ve long been drawn to dark stories and poetry, and these are the things I write.

We all know paranormal, horror,and urban fantasy dominate the market.Some say these books flood the market; I believe readership for these types of stories will always exist, but that’s another post. Earlier this week, Rebecca celebrated some of the best horror novels and anthologies in this post. Many members of my writing tribe author the same types of stories. Why does this demand continue to exist? Why do we read them or pay money to see the horror movies, or the tragic love stories?

Is it, as Stephen King, or even Edgar Allan Poe, suggests, because we harbor these things within us?

Yes, I believe so.

Even a good love story, or comedy, requires a counterpoint between light and dark. One antonym for darkness is illumination. We want to do more than survive, we seek enlightenment. And there’s the balance- the theme- of many of the stories we read and tell to each other.

King also suggests we need these stories to save us. When I staggered through some of the harder times in my life, reading Dean Koontz and Anne Rice reminded me how weird and beautiful live is- even during the unpretty parts. When I shivered, my heart raced, or I cried for a favorite character, I experienced a much-needed emotional release. I compare this to our love for music. From Andrew Lloyd Weber’s Phantom of the Opera to popular progressive rock band Tool, millions find catharsis in someone else’s song, or story.

Any good story I’ve read- and this is my opinion- contains some element of darkness, as most tell a love story as well. This creates much-needed tension and conflict. Otherwise, dull Pollyannas and mundane resolutions would crowd the literary landscape. Our stories should be at least as complex, if not more so, as our inner lives. We all harbor secrets, doubts, fears, regrets, or anger. Not that we let these things govern our lives, but we should spill them, along with a little blood, onto the page.

Are you drawn to stories with darker elements in them? When writing, how deep do you dig into your psyche? Do you feel that these types of stories or music provides catharsis?

* Artwork is Courtyard with Lunatics by Goya (1794)

 
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Posted by on October 19, 2012 in What We Write

 

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A Writer’s Guilty Pleasures

     I wanted to write something cerebral, but it occurs to me April Fool’s Day is coming up and I’d like to have a little fun, perhaps at my own expense. I’ve included one of my favorite memes; just substitute Facebook for solitaire, and you have one of my guilty pleasures.

     Little do people know writers have the best sense of humor, it comes with the thick skin and drinking problems.(You don’t have one? Whoops, I’ll just tuck my afternoon glass of wine away for now….)

     This is my short list of guilty pleasures, interspersed with favorite links, some downright decadent.

Are there really writers who hate to kill of characters? Hm, it gives me a thrill. Does this mean I’m a deviant? Don’t answer that.

Wearing sweats/pajamas to work everyday. Yes, I said it.

Caffeine.

Craft books and blogs about writing:

Anything by Donald Maass

Stephen King’s On Writing

Kristen Lamb’s blog  http://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/

Joy Held’s Writer Wellness

http://terribleminds.com/ramble/

I enjoy long afternoon naps. Okay, I like to dream about long afternoon naps. Stephen King does it. Why won’t anyone listen to my reasoning?

Reading books, watching movies and calling it research. Score!

First drafts. Remember to write this one for yourself and you’ll know what I mean about guilty pleasures. Yes, it’s work, but the dirty stuff comes later, let this one spew forth.

Community. This has to be my favorite. I love to meet other writers, talk craft, pick up knowledge here and there.

Procrastination. But I have learned that I’m at my best when I let an idea baste in its juices until my subconscious gleans everything it can. These are some great links for the Intrepid Procrastinator:

http://www.cracked.com/

http://theoatmeal.com/

http://pinterest.com/

http://misfitsandmascara.com/

What are some of your guilty pleasures? I like to call them “creative rest”. Please share yours, and any fun or helpful links you love as well.

 
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Posted by on March 30, 2012 in Uncategorized

 

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Bring Your Shovel

     “The writer’s job is to use the tools in his or her toolbox to get as much of each one out of the ground intact as possible.”

     ~Stephen King

     I asked for feedback on a few pieces recently, and the advice I received said the same thing in so many words. “Dig Deeper.” These are wonderful writers, and I value their insight. I am not a whiner….

     Okay, maybe I whined once, to my better half. He raised his eyebrows and said,”Sounds like you have work to do.” He’s a great guy, and in the end I’m always glad he doesn’t coddle.

     I ate two five Cadbury Eggs, and sucked it up. I took a moment to review all the awesome things they said about my writing, then I read the suggestions for change once again.

     Dig deeper. Go further. Clarify.

     Sometimes, writing feels like one of those bad dreams in which you show up naked to school. For a moment, I felt like I’d gone to an excavation without my heavy-duty shovel. Instead, I brought along my mincing, passive, plant-the-tulips spade. Whoops. Color me embarrassed.

     But I’m a corn-fed midwestern girl. I know how to roll up my sleeves and put on my big boots when the manure gets deep. I took a hot bath to wash off the malodor of self-gratification and soak in my main character’s motivations and back story.

     I love my fellow writers and I imagine at least one of you are in the position of standing knee-deep in the crud of revisions(It’s okay. I checked around and revisions are like that.) and realize your tools just aren’t enough. Take a deep breath, bring your shovel, and continue reading.

     10 Tips For Getting Dirty:

1. Ask lots of questions. First, ask them of yourself. Why is this story important to you? Is it still important? Often, which is my case, we have trouble connecting to our characters. Interview them. What impact does your main character have on other characters in the story? This is a biggie. There should be a contingency of influence.

2.  Writing prompts are gold. An image may be the conduit to better understanding of not only characters, but theme and voice. Many writers use photos of models, actors, etc. who resemble their protagonist.

3.  Write a scene from a different point-of-view. Give someone else the reigns, a voice. They may illuminate a few grey areas.

4.  Read within your genre. But read critically. Another author may have had a similar problem. How did they handle it?

5.  Create back story. This doesn’t need to go in your book, but the connection is worth the time.

6.  Write it out. I’m a free-writing junkie. But the act of writing(and not just revising, editing, etc.)alone reminds me why I put my knee-high waders on in the first place. This also helps to organize your various tools, make room for the heavy-duty shovel.

7.  Character sketches aren’t for pansies. Does the reader care that Evie likes the color purple and her favorite band is Deathcab For Cutie? Maybe not so much, but this is like back story. It’s another opportunity for your sub-conscious to wrap itself around the world you’ve created.

8.  Focus on what you’ve done right and write to your strengths. Sometimes, we just need to build a little muscle before we play with the big boys.

9.  Step outside of your comfort zone. This one gives me the willies. Give me a Snuggie and a box of chocolate covered cherries. I like comfort. But change is good, and fun. If you’re a plotter, try pantsing. Vice versa. Or start small-if you write at home at your desk everyday, grab a notebook and head to the park. Then there are the lovely bits I call “creative rest.” Pick up a craft book, or watch a movie you’ve never considered.

10. Get personal. This is the part where I forgot to put clothes on, much less pack my utility belt. I wrote about subject matter close to my heart, but I backed off. Readers know when you’re hiding something. My readers did. I’ve changed my perspective. I’ve mapped the terrain, and it’s not a scary place. Think of it more like a seductive veil dance. Find your rhythm and be unafraid of what’s underneath. Everyone has vulnerabilities. Sharing them is not a sign of feebleness.

     How do you unearth your booty of unwritten gold? Do you use any of the aforementioned tips? And please, share your experiences from the mining shafts.

     Happy digging!

image:http://www.morguefile.com/

 
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Posted by on March 2, 2012 in Craft, Motivation, Writing

 

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