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The Write Space

As a writer, I crave a quiet sanctuary where I can pen my prose, drink my tea, gorge on chocolate, and woo my muse, Elarin. Yes, my muse has a name. You can read more about her here. I dream of a place where I can be surrounded by all my favorite books. Floor to ceiling bookshelves line the wall. A reading nook with a soft leather chair looks out a bay window and onto the ocean. It’s a place for solace, for thinking, for Elarin and me to wax creative. A place all my own.

Instead, I write among the chaos in my life. My bedroom is my writing space. It’s also my sleeping, watching TV, reading, and playing xbox space. It’s a space I share with my other half and the only space that’s almost mine in a house we share with his parents and his sister. (Not for much longer, though.) It’s full of piles of clean laundry, coats hanging on the back of the doors, towels drying on the radiator, hubby watching tv beside me, niece and nephews running up and down the stairs, people cooking in the kitchen, dogs barking outside, and me wishing they world would disappear so I could concentrate. But it doesn’t matter. I have to write. I have to create the space in my head and do what I need to do. So I turn on my ipod, put on my headphones, and transport myself to the ‘write space’.

I’m sure I’m not the only one who has to find space to write within the chaos of their life. I’m sure many of you write on top of piles of laundry, with children hanging off your leg, hiding in the bathroom with a pen and paper, in coffee shops, or in the shower. In truth it’s not about the write space, you can make any space the write space. The write space is in your head, you take it with you wherever you go. When you sit down and show up to write, you create the write space. But I can still dream about my floor to ceiling book cases, my sea views, and a space of my own. Here are some famous writing spaces.

Where is your favorite place to write? How do you write among the chaos in your life? Are you lucky enough to have a dedicated writing space you love? If so, share a picture or describe your space. You can share a description of your dream space too!

 

A Novel Setting

The color of the sky was a stormy gray with hints of green. I could hardly tell where the sky ended and the sea began. The horizon was like one big angry mass rushing toward me. Waves threw themselves against the rocky shoreline mercilessly. I stood on the pier, feeling the icy spray soaking my bare skin and through my clothes. The water seemed determined to reach me in one way or another. I clenched my hands tighter around the wood railing and felt tiny splinters embedding themselves in my skin, but I didn’t mind. It connected me and gave me a tenuous hold on something real, something solid. My hair whipped around my face and I could smell the salty brine that had permeated the strands. I pulled my hair back with one hand and glanced over my shoulder. The trees stood back from the beach, but leaned forward in the wind, their bare gray limbs seeming to stretch toward me. Behind the front line, more trees waited. They swayed like soldiers impatient for their turn when their ranks started to fall. I turned back to face the sea. I was alone and no one could help me.

I wrote this paragraph to show how setting plays a role in stories. A strong setting can become another character in the story. Look at the Harry Potter series. Would it have been half as charming if it hadn’t been set in Hogwarts? What about Diagon Alley or Hogsmeade? The descriptions of these places made them seem real. Who wouldn’t want to visit? Or consider the Twilight series. The description of the woods and coast of Forks was so clear and such a part of the story that it’s hard to imagine this story taking place anywhere else.

The setting is where and/or when a story takes place, however, it also includes the “background noise,” such as the people and things that don’t really play a role except to establish a backdrop. Think of your story as a play. You can have the most fascinating characters and stimulating plot, but if the backdrop behind them is dull or blank the audience loses interest. No matter if you write science fiction, fantasy, contemporary or any other genre – your setting plays an integral part to your story.

A few years ago, I had the wonderful fortune of seeing the traveling Broadway production of Wicked. Before it started you could see the backdrop of the Clock of the Time Dragon. It was exactly as its name suggests – a huge clock with a dragon and its open leathery wings perched on top. To say I was fascinated before the lights dimmed is an understatement. Does this mean you have to have a giant clock and dragon on the first page of your story to snare a reader’s interest? No (though it never hurts, in my book). It just shows the power of setting.  If I’d sat down in the theater and there was nothing but a white screen, I can guarantee I wouldn’t have made it through the almost three hour performance.

You can be descriptive and place your readers into the story without overwhelming them in detail or bogging the flow of your story down. If I’m reading a story that goes into a description which spans several pages, I skip ahead. Learning to balance your setting description while keeping your story moving takes time and lots of practice. There are tons of books, websites, and articles that can give you a thousand different ways to create the perfect setting and I recommend you read as many as you can. However, once you’ve read some craft books, the best way to get better is to keep writing. Ask questions of your own work and when you’re able to answer them, offer your work to others to read and have them ask questions. No one writes perfectly. There is no such thing as a perfect first or even second draft. Okay. The words perfect and draft don’t even belong in the same sentence. My suggestion to help you create a fantastic setting? Keep reading craft books, attend classes if you’re able, but above all – keep writing.

 
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Posted by on March 5, 2012 in Craft, Setting, Writing

 

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Bring Your Shovel

     “The writer’s job is to use the tools in his or her toolbox to get as much of each one out of the ground intact as possible.”

     ~Stephen King

     I asked for feedback on a few pieces recently, and the advice I received said the same thing in so many words. “Dig Deeper.” These are wonderful writers, and I value their insight. I am not a whiner….

     Okay, maybe I whined once, to my better half. He raised his eyebrows and said,”Sounds like you have work to do.” He’s a great guy, and in the end I’m always glad he doesn’t coddle.

     I ate two five Cadbury Eggs, and sucked it up. I took a moment to review all the awesome things they said about my writing, then I read the suggestions for change once again.

     Dig deeper. Go further. Clarify.

     Sometimes, writing feels like one of those bad dreams in which you show up naked to school. For a moment, I felt like I’d gone to an excavation without my heavy-duty shovel. Instead, I brought along my mincing, passive, plant-the-tulips spade. Whoops. Color me embarrassed.

     But I’m a corn-fed midwestern girl. I know how to roll up my sleeves and put on my big boots when the manure gets deep. I took a hot bath to wash off the malodor of self-gratification and soak in my main character’s motivations and back story.

     I love my fellow writers and I imagine at least one of you are in the position of standing knee-deep in the crud of revisions(It’s okay. I checked around and revisions are like that.) and realize your tools just aren’t enough. Take a deep breath, bring your shovel, and continue reading.

     10 Tips For Getting Dirty:

1. Ask lots of questions. First, ask them of yourself. Why is this story important to you? Is it still important? Often, which is my case, we have trouble connecting to our characters. Interview them. What impact does your main character have on other characters in the story? This is a biggie. There should be a contingency of influence.

2.  Writing prompts are gold. An image may be the conduit to better understanding of not only characters, but theme and voice. Many writers use photos of models, actors, etc. who resemble their protagonist.

3.  Write a scene from a different point-of-view. Give someone else the reigns, a voice. They may illuminate a few grey areas.

4.  Read within your genre. But read critically. Another author may have had a similar problem. How did they handle it?

5.  Create back story. This doesn’t need to go in your book, but the connection is worth the time.

6.  Write it out. I’m a free-writing junkie. But the act of writing(and not just revising, editing, etc.)alone reminds me why I put my knee-high waders on in the first place. This also helps to organize your various tools, make room for the heavy-duty shovel.

7.  Character sketches aren’t for pansies. Does the reader care that Evie likes the color purple and her favorite band is Deathcab For Cutie? Maybe not so much, but this is like back story. It’s another opportunity for your sub-conscious to wrap itself around the world you’ve created.

8.  Focus on what you’ve done right and write to your strengths. Sometimes, we just need to build a little muscle before we play with the big boys.

9.  Step outside of your comfort zone. This one gives me the willies. Give me a Snuggie and a box of chocolate covered cherries. I like comfort. But change is good, and fun. If you’re a plotter, try pantsing. Vice versa. Or start small-if you write at home at your desk everyday, grab a notebook and head to the park. Then there are the lovely bits I call “creative rest.” Pick up a craft book, or watch a movie you’ve never considered.

10. Get personal. This is the part where I forgot to put clothes on, much less pack my utility belt. I wrote about subject matter close to my heart, but I backed off. Readers know when you’re hiding something. My readers did. I’ve changed my perspective. I’ve mapped the terrain, and it’s not a scary place. Think of it more like a seductive veil dance. Find your rhythm and be unafraid of what’s underneath. Everyone has vulnerabilities. Sharing them is not a sign of feebleness.

     How do you unearth your booty of unwritten gold? Do you use any of the aforementioned tips? And please, share your experiences from the mining shafts.

     Happy digging!

image:http://www.morguefile.com/

 
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Posted by on March 2, 2012 in Craft, Motivation, Writing

 

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